The One...

topic posted Sun, October 11, 2009 - 10:03 PM by  CanScorpiTarius
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...I wrote this a while ago...


Word of mouth, thoughts of clouds, endless sky, restricted time,
pain I defuse,
As I have this blank expression, the currents undertoe intertwine,
Knots in my heart and belly,
Wish I can just have her, solid and steady,
Mental blocks, I feel that I am ready, but understanding of the heart,
Its pain and happiness, is what rises and falls to its own tune being,
Dancing ferociassly is my heart, ready to devour my loves offerings,
Take her hand and caress her hair, eyes that make my time not even care,
At this point I know that my Queen awaits me, and when our lives intersect,
Tasteful fruit juices, undeniable pheromones, I got you honey and thats a bet,
Loyalty is my #1 rule, I know that sometimes I can be cold, but I can be just as hot,
Im not trippin' just sticking to the facts,
Now I wave my hand here in my cacoon, mystic thoughts slippin' through the cracks...
Patient I have become, cause I know that in the long run,
The equinox will happen, longer than an eclipse, the Moon God will have his Sun,
And thats just what I want....
The ONE...
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CanScorpiTarius
New York City
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  • Re: The One...

    Sun, November 8, 2009 - 8:02 PM
    This is beautiful. The choice of words are great. Punctuation threw me off a little. Be curious, how you read, the commas, so that I may know better, this poem.

    (I'd slow it down with some periods, I'd love to hear this....feels very spoken word genre yet still lyrical on paper!)
  • Re: The One...

    Mon, November 9, 2009 - 12:09 PM
    Thank you very much to both of you. And yes I do read it a certain way because of the breaks, when I do read it, it sounds better than when someone else would read it.

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